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Unit 4: Close study of literary texts
Quick questions on Controlling idea and purpose in creative response: QCE English Unit 4 (IA3)
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What is what a controlling idea is not?Show answer
Not a theme label. "Loss", "memory", "power", "isolation" are theme labels. A theme label is a starting point, not a controlling idea. Many responses operate around the same theme but make different claims about it.
What is establishing the controlling idea before drafting?Show answer
A common Band 4 trap is to write the response first and articulate the controlling idea afterwards (in the reflection). The result is usually a response that does several things adequately but no single thing well.
What is sustaining the controlling idea through the response?Show answer
Sustaining means returning to the controlling idea repeatedly without restating it. Three sustaining techniques:
What is purpose, audience and context?Show answer
The QCE syllabus pairs controlling idea with purpose, audience and context. These three frame the response:
What is auditing for controlling-idea coherence?Show answer
After drafting, audit the response paragraph by paragraph:
What is common errors?Show answer
Theme label instead of controlling idea. "This response is about memory." Marker asks: what is the response arguing about memory? Refine.
What is not a theme label?Show answer
"Loss", "memory", "power", "isolation" are theme labels. A theme label is a starting point, not a controlling idea. Many responses operate around the same theme but make different claims about it.
What is not a transformation strategy alone?Show answer
"I am re-telling the closing chapter from a different perspective" is a transformation move, not a controlling idea. The transformation move is the means; the controlling idea is the end.
What is not a moral?Show answer
A response that ends with "and so the lesson is..."
What is not the source's controlling idea repeated?Show answer
Restating the source's argument adds nothing. Your controlling idea should illuminate, complicate, extend or contest the source's.
What is motif?Show answer
A recurring image, phrase or scene that the response keeps coming back to. Each return adds a new facet to the controlling idea. The motif is rarely commented on; the reader perceives the accumulating weight.
What is structural return?Show answer
The response opens and closes on the same scene, image or voice, with the closing inflected by everything in between. The change in tone or meaning across the structural return carries the controlling idea.
What is tonal pressure?Show answer
The response's tone tightens or shifts to mark the controlling idea coming into focus. A response that opens conversational and closes spare; or opens spare and closes lyrical.
What is purpose?Show answer
What you want the reader to feel, think, doubt, reconsider, accept or reject about the source. The purpose is the experiential goal of the response.
What is audience?Show answer
Who the response is imagined for. A reader who has read the source? A reader who has not?