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Unit 4: Close study of literary texts
Quick questions on Building an analytical thesis for the QCE English EA: Unit 4 Topic 2
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What is what a thesis is not?Show answer
Not the prompt. The prompt asks "how does the text construct X". The thesis is your specific answer to that question.
What is the four-step procedure for constructing a thesis from a prompt?Show answer
Step 1. Identify the directive verb of the prompt. Common verbs: "Discuss" (balanced response), "To what extent" (graduated response), "How does" (craft response), "Analyse" (close-reading response), "Evaluate" (critical-judgement response). The verb determines the shape of your response.
What is a reliable thesis-and-signpost template for the EA opening?Show answer
The EA opening (around 100 to 150 words) does the following work:
What is how the body develops the thesis?Show answer
The body paragraphs each defend one facet of the thesis. The strongest body sequences move:
What is signposting the thesis through the body?Show answer
The thesis should be visible at every body paragraph topic sentence and closing sentence. Not restated word-for-word; restated with new pressure and new facet.
What is complicating the thesis?Show answer
A Band 6 essay does not just defend the thesis; it complicates it. Complication takes one of three forms:
What is common thesis errors?Show answer
Thesis as theme label. "The text is about power" is not a thesis. Refine.
What is not the prompt?Show answer
The prompt asks "how does the text construct X". The thesis is your specific answer to that question.
What is not a theme label?Show answer
"The text explores power" labels a theme. A thesis says something specific about how the text explores power.
What is not a plot summary?Show answer
A thesis is an interpretive claim, not a description of events.
What is not a statement of liking?Show answer
"The text effectively uses symbolism" is an evaluative judgement, not a thesis.
What is step 1. Identify the directive verb of the prompt?Show answer
Common verbs: "Discuss" (balanced response), "To what extent" (graduated response), "How does" (craft response), "Analyse" (close-reading response), "Evaluate" (critical-judgement response). The verb determines the shape of your response.
What is step 2. Identify the concern named in the prompt?Show answer
A noun or noun phrase that names what the prompt asks you to address (representation of power, the construction of memory, the role of silence). Mark this in your annotation.
What is step 3. Generate a first-draft thesis?Show answer
A reliable template: "The text constructs [concern] through [specific means], with the result that [specific effect on the reader / interpretive claim]."
What is step 4. Refine to a more searching claim?Show answer
Many first-draft theses are correct but not interesting. Push the thesis to a more searching position: "The more searching claim is that power, in this text, operates most fully where the text refuses to render it directly."